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:iconmoyan:
full rowans
stretched across the sky
the silence of a raven


-by ~cmrlj. he is my haiku pal.

here's my take on a visualization of the autumn he saw and the japanese rendition of his haiku:

七竈満ちる無言の鴉哉
nana kamado michiru mugon no karasu kana

nana kamado is literally "seventh stove". this species of ash wood is said to be able to stayed unburnt even after the seventh time inserted under a stove.

my art tools and preparation work for this painting here:



by #dALinkSystem, look at Raven's taunt by ~iofrost:



and etching Quoth the Raven by ~this-blue-moon:

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:icondjelectriczone:
Well let's begin that I'm a big fan of the crows and I think that Karasu is a smart bird since I was Kid I was Always look after the behavior of the crows ....It's a hard bird to make it domestic pet.....But let's back on my opinion of this art It's amazing I see how hard-working you are ......maybe I could draw this art but maybe after 20 years :D......The colors are bright and the black and red reminds me of the red dawning sun and the black sky in the night ....
This art is absolutely adorable and beautiful :)
Best wishes :Dj.E.Z
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for comment/critique contest, December 2012:
This is a very well done piece. One of the best features of this picture is the way you made the viewers' eyes travel. For me, I started at the crow, went down to the branches, and from that point I admired the entire painting as a whole. I like how you placed the crow inside such a bright setting where as a lot of other artists would surround it with gloom. One suggestion that I have is to make the colors more rich or deeper in color. Doing this would create a more defined contrast, and naturally magnetize eyes to this painting. Hope this helped! Keep up the great work.
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:iconvolker03:
Mood: Love *volker03 Apr 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is so great. Your work is really very wonderful...
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~pandoraravenkate Mar 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I LOVE Ravens!
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:iconlost-of-existence:
Looks great! I'm envious of your mad watercolor skillz. :D
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:icondenzalan:
=denzalan Dec 15, 2012   Artist
this is with simply pretty
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*ForestOfWerewolves Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Amazing!
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~Bormi Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
so nice :)
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:iconmelikeumanime:
Excellent work moyan. Great stuff.
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:iconcmrlj:
an interesting variation on the theme, i'm flattered. nice one, peng! ( :
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:iconmoyan:
*moyan Dec 1, 2012  Professional General Artist
The lack of punctuation is a good thing! That allows for more ways to read the haiku. :D
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~scorpionr95 Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Amazing work!!
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